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03:11
Also a first time writing young male erotica. Spike is bae.
03:16
In light of the June theme, I don’t mind leaving the ending where it’s at, but I’d like to hear opinions on whether it can stand on its own as-is or not and whether it’s interesting enough to readers to see a more solid conclusion.
Story was very weird story. Characterization was good. Really one sided most of the story with Spike being unconscious for most of the encounter.
As it stands the story really feels has very little tension without Spike feeling anything due to unconsciousness induced by drugs.
Loved when Twilight entered, and really set the bar for consequences.
I would give a 6 out of 10
I believe the unconscious angle could work. If there is more tension because of being caught or wrongfullnes of the act. If you had more than one character awake is another way it could work.
I get what you mean. I could see maybe giving Smolder more of an internal monologue for tension. In the end, it was only an experiment, so I'm thinking it might not be continued.
21:11
There was a lot more description I could have done with the sex acts she performed where that kind of tension would fit. I'd like first to come to some conclusion with Twi's reaction.
Because alicorns age slowly, Luna still looks like a little filly, even though she's 93 years old. Unlike her sister, though, she prefers colts her own apparent age.
It's date night for your parents. Which means you have a babysitter watching you tonight. Yet, this babysitter is different from the others. She's Princess Cadance, the newly crowned royalty-in-training. She loves her job. Perhaps, too much.
After being dragged to a Wonderbolt show, Rumble meets the new girl in town...
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In fact, there's nothing else in the colt/filly X human foalcon category, so if there's any others on the site, they've never been catalogued by the Foalcon group. There might be some stray pieces in various clop compendiums, though
The reader comment asking about the servant is due to the fact that in the US there are no key keepers or doormen at apartments. Funny cultural difference.
11:45
At least I've never come across any.
11:46
I really enjoyed Redheart's inner conflict. Completely relatable.
Lil Cheese is determined to make this Mother's Day a special on for Pinkie Pie. He'll try to give his mom the best gift a mare can ask for: satisfaction.
I need help on how to continue my first foalcon story. I've set up that sex in Equestria isn't nearly as taboo as it is irl, and that the foals (including Rumble, the protag) in Ponyville's school are going to be learning Sex Ed for a few weeks.
I know there's a million different directions I could take this, but I'm indecisive af, so I'd like to hear your suggestions, if you have them. If at all possible, I'd like to keep this gay, or at least bi
or have Rumble want to use what he learn....wait, there really isn't too much, everyone is saying the same thing
Holtinater
I need help on how to continue my first foalcon story. I've set up that sex in Equestria isn't nearly as taboo as it is irl, and that the foals (including Rumble, the protag) in Ponyville's school are going to be learning Sex Ed for a few weeks.
I know there's a million different directions I could take this, but I'm indecisive af, so I'd like to hear your suggestions, if you have them. If at all possible, I'd like to keep this gay, or at least bi
Maybe they start with heterosexual intercourse for for the purpose of procreation at school. His friend suggests "practicing" because it "doesn't count" then after discovering oral(maybe they try anal first but because they are tense and do not have lube they fail) they find out in class the next day that is does count and about the wonders of lube and condoms. I just think that experimental oral scene may be hot.
Don't worry, I haven't had any time to work on it since I asked
07:56
Button: Dude, don't even worry about it. My bro says it's not gay as long as the balls don't touch
Rumble: Your brother is famously a flaming homosexual
Button: Which means he's an expert!
Question: What’s it called when a colt orgasms but doesn’t shoot anything because they haven’t hit puberty yet? I know there’s “shooting blanks”, but I feel like there’s other words for it.
At least better then my other half. He has 0 libido due to him being cut and he didn't even know about it till I saw it. People really need to learn that being cut to "keep clean" is some dumb meme by people to try to justify stupid religious practices
I'm cut but still prefer dry using the skin like a sheath. I've tried wet and it just lacks control
23:20
I doubt being cut reduces libido as well. I've done something like, I dunno, 16 in 8 hours, and if I let myself, I could probably sustain twice a day for a few weeks at least.
Flutterpony
I'm cut but still prefer dry using the skin like a sheath. I've tried wet and it just lacks control
I normally do dry. Using something soft, like the edge of duvet with non-scratchy covers, or sheets can also enhance the experience so long as you're mindful of cleanup.
00:18
I have tried with lube as well, and found it really nice. You can really stimulate the end with your fingers when slick.
I doubt being cut reduces libido as well. I've done something like, I dunno, 16 in 8 hours, and if I let myself, I could probably sustain twice a day for a few weeks at least.
Well for my partner since the head has always been exposed to things like his pants ect, it means it's lost its sensitivity and been replaced with pain when he tries to do anything. He gets hard but you try to do anything with it and it just starts to hurt him
01:06
And yes I've used lube ect but it still hurts him and he has no drive to do anything sexual as a result of it
Idea
Spikes at the comic book shop asking why he can't go in the back (naughty comics) and discord walks in to pick up an order for fluttershy and he sees spike and they get to talking and spike says he's kinda bummed out and let's it slip that he needs a sitter but no one can so he might get stuck with a boring sitter. Spike leaves and discord watching his little behind leave he grins as he gets an idea and goes to the back to buy spike a special comic
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